Wednesday, December 9, 2015
test of great bow
Staggering outside the balcony was the only time I smiled in the past years. Approaching the front post I smirked once more only seeing with my eyes pigs. Livestock so unworthy I held up the bow. I raised my voice once again. I said so ever easily as the post was set up for people to prepare there unworthy trials. There i stood as many started to rabble with nonsense nothing much more than lies. Only my true husband could make this shot i said. Will i see him today or an unworthy suitor. I thought again if someone could truly accomplish what Odysseus has done and there i acted again smirking and stood drinking my tea with a serious face.
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Creative work, nice job!
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ReplyDeleteshows us how Penelope feels about being lonely for so many years and getting tired of it.
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